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There’s something eternally familiar in these pieces of work. Fire opens with the line ‘I’m not afraid to live and I’m not afraid to die, so if you’re thinking of killing me, go ahead and try.’ The author (alias Ha, Spirit) describes himself as a forty-something-year-old Londoner of Caribbean descent but there’s more than four decades of weight behind these texts. ‘I call it a ‘group soul mentality’, emenating from the evolutionary beginnings of my ancestral family…’, a line from DNA. In short, there’s no second guessing. No stereo-typing. This is a genuine original. Of course, it has some shade (some works are almost too short to register) as well as light. Still, I’d recommend it, for anyone seeking a concise literary life companion, to assist them in making sense of their own life and times." Khome - editor@unheardwords.com, 2008 |
Letters to Myself by Ha, Spirit |
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"The opening scene of Daughter Denied features Brother Floyd being handcuffed and led away from his family home by two plainclothes detectives. No sympathy is shown by his wife, Earnestine or youngest daughter, Tina, who as her stepfather is led away tries hard to conceal a smile. Thus, the three principle protagonists are set before us. The novel moves forward from this intro to involve us in the lives of these characters from late 60s to 70s. The narratives on this journey emerge through: Earnestine, a mother with four, destined to become five, children and two types of debilitating dependency, drugs and her husband (Brother Floyd); and Tina, Earnestine’s youngest daughter, who wrestles with the obvious differences in appearance between herself and the rest of the family, her short kinky hair, dark skin, full lips and wide nose, mark her out. |
| Daughter Denied by Alretha Thomas |
The child is drawn to her mommy, perhaps seeking the love and acceptance that is not that easy to come by in a household subject to hard times, the uncertainty of parental feuds and the constancy of a chill wind, blown deliberately in her direction by her stepfather. The lives of the mother and children are punctuated by the goings and comings of Brother Floyd, a leopard not willing or able to change its spots. Between bouts in jail, Floyd’s stints with his wife and “family” cause a mix of disturbance and tension. Though his relationship with Earnestine blends love with hate, it adds little to the stability and well being of the children. |
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It’s the touching story of the precarious nature of these lives, their small steps and grand designs we’re called upon to engage with. An engagement weaved mainly through dialogue and letters which serve to drive the drama on, conveying the circumstances of the mother, seeking simply to endure and keep faith with the faithless antics of her husband; and the daughter, seeking despite the odds to find something good in herself upon which to develop. If there are some reservations about the writing, they concern the ‘straight telling’ style which sometimes sacrifices tone and texture for speech. This can make for a challenge, requiring the reader to contextualise implied emotions and scenic detail. Its strength lies in conveying the genuine difficulties of ‘chaotic’ / deprived family lives (set in the low hope American Projects) and in the resonance evoked through the eyes of an innocent child / come young woman. Whilst it is weaker in maintaining narrative drive, with description increasingly diminishing into plain spoken dialogue." Khome - editor@unheardwords.com, 2008 -return home- |
| "You cannot fail to be moved, reduced to tears by the uncompromising ‘docu-narrative’ style account of one family’s traumatic journey through adversity and pain, towards self-realisation and personal growth. Marlow portrays the insidious and soul destroying nature of domestic violence in ways that both reveal and compel This deeply descriptive story sets down a legacy, that speaks loudly of the pain of four generations of women, required to hold themselves and their families together. Hints at the pressures and frustrations that turn ideals of family into cycles of aggression and violence. Asserts self-respect as a positive overarching message for womankind, whilst providing a call for mankind to sit up and start listening." Khome, editor@unheardwords.com -return home- |
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"It’s another day for Rahkel, and over the past few years, each day has
presented its own challenges. 'Searchable Whereabouts' opens on the third anniversary
of her son, Matthew’s death. We touch upon some of the grief that has resulted, as she
wakes to face the memory of her loss.
Though today, as hinted by her horoscope, marks the start of something entirely
different; ‘When searching for what you want, the answer lies in front of you…and
comes to light when you least expect it’. As she goes about her job, book keeping at her Uncle Leon’s leasing company, she notices some unusual loans and payments. Her interest awakened, she beginnings to find her Uncle’s behaviour increasing odd. |
| Searchable Whereabouts by Tinish Nicole Johnson |
When Leon suddenly leaves town and is later discovered to have died in a car accident, her suspicions are heightened. |
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What lays behind the shady
business deals? What was her Uncle so keen to avoid or find? Was it an
accident or was he murdered? Of course, it’s in reading on that we find the
answer to all these questions, and some twists and turns besides. It may sound conventional in its crime-style plotting but it’s difference lays in a blend of the workaday domestic, private investigation and the uncovering of clues. Told through the initially ‘red…and tired’ eyes of Rahkel, the story involves us in her re-emergence into life, through healing reminiscence, relationships with family and friends, and growing trust in romantic love. In part the novel is uneven, some chapters appearing to spend too much time dwelling on areas removed from the central plot lines. Possibly this is the result of the author’s ambition; seeking to crisscross the day-in-the-life domestic with the hyper-overtones of criminal intent. This makes for more of a thriller with charm than tension and suspense. All the same it's an interesting thriller, with a domestic difference; behind the crimes there are always life-stories to be told." Khome - editor@unheardwords.com, 2007 |
| "Upon the canvas - a collection of verse, photographs and prose - Petronella Breinburg allows her thoughts on 45 years spent living in Britain, to flow. It's residence in Britain that provides a platform for a recollection that spans decades, countries and insights, based on a rich mix of cultural interactions. From birth place Suriname, founding years spent in Guyana, and onto Britain, Breinburg has travelled widely and achieved much, overcoming barriers that would have halted many." Published 2007, ISBN 0-9549992-2-3 Price £6.99 plus £2.03 P&P |
Thoughts of a Creole Woman: A Reminiscence by Petronella Breinburg (click for review) |
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| "Bully Boss is a frank, open and personal account of unpleasant work experiences. A bullying manager can cause immeasurable pain and play havoc with one's psyche. At times I became bitter, angry and down in the dumps. Yes, I was stressed out, washed out and frustrated by my experience, but the ordeal was not just about me. It had consumed my psyche, and crushed my relationships. I was fortunate that the bonds in my family were too strong for it to dominate. I had no choice, I was determined to make it through." You can also Visit the authors blogspot. | ![]() Bully Boss by Helen Christina |
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At heart, this is an old story about people's desire for more than they have, some men’s inability to respect women and racism in the workplace. A tale, brought up to date with the latest fashions, fads and 'wish I had' designer labels. It's style is in your face sensationalist and very little is left to the imagination. If all of this sounds appealing and in part it is - who could resist an insight into the worlds of the rich and powerful - there are some drawbacks. At 450 pages this book takes a long time to pour out the lives of its lightly sketched characters. A little more editing would have gone a long way towards preserving more of the exceptional and removing much of the mundane. There is much evidence of a talented author behind the scenes but many of the book’s scenes stretch the point just too far..." Khome, Sept 2006 |
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Whispers and Moans by Yeeshan Yang Also available at Whispers-Moans |
"...The streets of Kowloon are home to a bewildering range of sex businesses but how do local prostitutes deal with the competition posed by mainland chinese women? Yang spent 12 months talking to those involved and this is just one of the questions she answers in her book." Khome |
| "Wilson...should be commended on creatively combining 80+ years of ancestors and events in such a well organized and concise manuscript. Mary displays her black pride in the variety of family hues, from near white, and medium brown to ebony black. I recommend this book for all born in this melting pot called America." Judine Slaughter, http://www.eybooks.com/ |
Colorless Soul by Mary Wilson |
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| I am a believer of 'words having power' and in my mind, if children are taught to stay away from negative language and behaviour, then we surely will have a chance in the days to come. These are the issues that are covered in the book. The book is written like any other child's story except the situation is more realistic." the author |
| "This book comprises thirty poems, free verse & rhyme. Eve’s subject matter covers just about everything in life, including: life, love, separation and self-esteem." Eve Hall resides in Atlanta, GA. She has been writing for more than 35 years. |
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Eve's Poetic Paradise by Evelyn D. Hall |
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Human Trial is am apocalyptic tale that focuses on race, human relationships and the survival of the humanity. A ragtag collection of Americans (fiercely led by Daron Turner and his pregnant co-worker Regina Jackson) struggle to survive after intergalactic invaders use advanced technology to adversely alter the earth’s climate. The survivors, a scattershot group of humans gather together and the stress takes its toll. Through comings and goings, individuals reach collective consensus - in order to work together effectively, they must overcome personal prejudices. The invaders, of course, have their own plans for the futher of human kind. "I enjoyed the sample pages I read of this novel. I like the very immediate way in which the author describes events, the pace, the promise of the characters and particularly the opening banter between Daron and Regina - all bodes well. It seems like a real page turner and that's no bad thing; an unlikely tale, but with 'real' life-like characters..." - Khome 2009 |
| "A highly readable story of space, time and exploration, which does a good job at blending science with fiction and slightly less well at blending characters into the action. When the dreams of the wife (Caroline) of a prominent citizen of the biosphere flagship, Centauri Princess, turn out to be prophetic, the governing authority decides drastic action is required. A small crew of astronauts / specialists is assembled and a mission commences in search of new sources of fuel on the relatively nearby planet, 'Delta Ice'. When the crew arrive at their destination they discover there’s more to this galactic outpost than the potential seams of Uranium they seek. Could this desolate world hold the real secret to Caroline’s premonitions? The book manages to convince through its imaginative and scientifically plausible portrayal of a future environment populated by humans journeying through space. However, creating realistic characters within a setting that’s culture and technology is way beyond our present comprehension, is never going to be easy. This difficulty is evident at times when thin inconsistently drawn characters, encounter extraordinary situations and fail to react in entirely believable ways. The attention to context, which is positive in creating a realistic sense of the future, also tends to slow the pace of the book; with much scene setting inevitably detracting from the narrative drive. Overall, an enjoyable novel, with just a touch too much science, getting in the way of the character fiction." Khome (editor@unheardwords.com), 2007 | ![]() "First Ark to Alpha Centauri 2: The True Price of Immortality " By A. Ahad |
| Purple Snowflake Marketing: How to make your book stand out in a crowd by Dave and Lillian Brummet |
No doubt in clearly setting out some of the obstacles that lay in wait for the brave author turned marketer, this guide performs a valuable and thought provoking function. More than this though, it goes on to explore the subject of promoting a book seriously and offers much needed assistance by presenting the essential ingredients of a comprehensive marketing plan. |
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The guide’s authors present tips, advice and ideas in a plain and straightforward way, making the book very accessible and easy to read. They include a variety of pertinent topics, including; writing and attracting reviews, building an audience and preparing press releases. I think this guide has something to offer to those considering or in the process of self-publishing. It’s also relevant to those who are simply interested in what it takes to successfully market a book. And whilst I don't pretend to understand what this all has to do with 'Purple Snowflake Marketing', the guide is genuinely filled with good ideas to 'make your book stand out in the crowd'." Khome (editor@unheardwords.com), 2007 |
For the free opportunity to promote your own work email editor@unheardwords.com (editor@unheardwords.com).